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[Fic] Second the Best [Dec. 28th, 2007|10:18 am]
Atlantis OT3


Title:Second The Best
Authors: perryvic & zaganthi
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Carson/John, Kolya/Rodney, Others/Rodney, Rodney/Carson/John
Warnings: AU, violence, non-con, dub con, mpreg, companion-slave fic
Disclaimer: We SO don't own this. In fact, we spend too much money on things associated with this. Hobbies are expensive.
Summary: There was a vague nod, and he kept John close, patted at his back.There was a whole mythology that he knew was built up against the ideaof being someone's second Choice, and the boy had to be caught up in amiserable moment to be Carson's not-first choice, and happy to bechosen at all. It wasn't how things should have been for either of them.

Second The Best

[User Picture]From: ratcreature
2007-12-29 08:49 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed this. It worked for my kinks in all the right ways.

I noticed though that in two places paragraphs were repeated, one was the section starting with "John was sleeping. Or he wasn't sleeping and he was feigning sleep [...]" and then aline starting with "Rodney shifted, pulled out, and exhaled hard." There were a couple of typos too, like someone saying "effecting you" instead of "affecting you" and such.
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[User Picture]From: zaganthi
2007-12-29 01:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you for pointing that out! I've fixed those. I'm glad you liked it!
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